Write a two stanza poem about some aspect of your family. Please include the following poetic terms: simile, metaphor, alliteration, personification, hyperbole, & onomatopoeia. (PLEASE WRITE YOUR NAME AND PERIOD THAT I TEACH YOU)
Example: He bounces around the backyard in his boots
Like a monkey chasing snowflakes in December
He melts my heart with just one lovely laugh
These are the days I'll always remember
Sometimes I'll catch myself daydreaming about him growing up
Tears skip down my face and I feel my heart break
Then "wack" a snowball smacks me in the back of my head
And I wake up from my trance and appreciate the smirk on my monkey's face
...as he runs away
He barkes at every bang at the door
ReplyDeleteHe gives orders like a milatary man
Makes annoying nosies I can never understand
He sleeps like a baby
He is just like another little brother
But I rather have him then any other
He wakes up at the crack of dawn
He plays X-Box all day long
He's like a scientist when it comes to football
Sometimes I want to smack him real hard
But deep down he is the best brother of all
Mya Washington
Period3
She play's soccer and wile she is playing
ReplyDeletethe soccer ball goes boom boom
she say's she is the best payer
but she noes she is not good enough
she say's she is like a tiger wile she is
running on the field
as she kicks the ball it goes higher
then the airplanes goes
sometimes she gets angry when she does not
make a goal!
- Morelia Huaman
p.4
I went to my room and my cousin was blah blah and she kept going with blah blah. I heard someone on the door ding dong and a car bepping at someone beep beep. I heard the wind swish swish. I heard a cat on the raod saying meaw meaw.
ReplyDeleteI heard a dog barking at me rough rough. My dad and my mom were talking blah blah and kept on and on. I heard a snake saying hisss hisss. i heard a baby cry waw waw mama waw waw.
Thalia Huaman
period 3
He went boom! When ran on ice then I heard the tree crying so I went to see what was going on but then I heard people yelling ahhhhhhhhh!!!!! I jumping for a moment but then I left cause I didn't wanna be involved.
ReplyDeleteNeysha Rivera
Per.3
a cousin following me on and on
ReplyDeletetrying to be like me
doing what i do
the very same thing
sports and video games
that's what we do best
we keep on playing on and on
to keep us from our rest
sometimes so annoying
but it doesn't seem so bad
so when the day comes to end
so before he goes back home
i say will you please come again
-Timothy Huynh
-period 4
He always keep saying "bark,bark,bark," when ever I come home. He is like a loud gym teacher when ever I see him. He is like a soft blanket when ever I touch him though.
ReplyDeleteDeep down he is very nice and cuddly. He will beg for a million years to give a piece,if you ever have food in your hand. He always "hop,hop,hop,hop every where like a hazardous rocket. This is my dog Jake.
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Period 4
although the darkness inside the girl shows itself being very vile, deep inside you can see the brightness with a nice smile.
ReplyDeleteshe bangs the door with a loud THUD, i fall to the floor and she hear's a thump. i try to run the trouble has begun as she brings up her arms she gives me a hug. =)
jason period-4
Great job so far everybody...keep up the good work!!
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my dog is a alarm clock waking me up,
ReplyDeleteBARK!at the door again
runs like a cheetah outside the park,
jumps on me and knocks me off.
zoommm like my dog outside,
jumps on me as a spring,
but i fall on the ground laughing all the way,
but i love my dog everyday.
My little brother is like a dog he always says woof woof and then he tries to bite me for no reason.I get so scared that i run away into my room and hide there for a little while and then i herd him comming.
ReplyDeletewhile i was running i felt like i was in a movie or something.then i BOOM BOOM!! I fell down and i was crying while my little brother laughing the whole time.when he sees my mom comming she runs away !!
Melany Munozz P.3
His Smile is so charming like the moon shining at night.
ReplyDeleteHe is as sweet as Carmel.
Every summer i remember the good days we had.
Sometimes i think i fall for you to fast but i try to catch myself and never look down.
Tears start coming down my face as i remember the good times we shared together.
I always try to forget about you,but honestly i cant. After, "ding" the school bell rings and i think to myself was this a dream? I walk down the hall trying to forget about you and everything about you, but sometimes i just cant...
-Kelly Fajardo<3.
Period 3.
He bounces off the walls like a bounce ball.
ReplyDeleteHe is the weight of an anker.
My head screams whenever he is around.
"BOOM BOOM" is the sound of his foot steps.
He is like a bomb fire in my heart.
But he is a charming child.
And he is as cute as a puppy.
But my heart still smiles when i see him.
Latrice Muckle, Period 3, English 7
Once upon a time i let me step sister ride my bike and when she was going down the hill ans dam crash. And i saw my little sister in the floor laughing and i ran and my bike had fallen in the grass next to the swings. She through her self off the bike when she was going to crash.
ReplyDeleteThe sounds of a hyena come out of her mouth
ReplyDeleteTempted to just tear her long black hair
Flowing like a dark waterfall
Her eyes eat everyone up,like a monster
Wheres the off to this thing
"Ka-Boom" is the sound,when you make her mad
It's like seeing fireworks in the 4th of July
She has the roar of a lion
But she will always be the sister that I love
Justin George Period 3,English 7
Like my bed they comfort me.
ReplyDeleteWhen a river of tears flows upon my face they dry it for me.
They're always there for me like the sun for the moon.
When I need something they provide
My parents confort me like my bed.
My parents wipe my tears away.
My parents are always there for me.
My parents provide for me.-Joi Tynes 3period English
They are always there through thick and thin.
ReplyDeleteStanding as leaders to protect our kin.
They've guided me when i did not now what to do.
Helping me make right desicons and seeing them throuh.
I appreciate their love and support.
my parnts the ones i dearly love the most.
-Taylor H -preiod3
as he runs around the house like a
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every STOMP STOMP STOMP he makes
he gets closer he then steps silently
and so swiftly a dog cant here him
as he gets closer i have no notice then i wonder "who is it" suddenly the doors whispered open and i see a shadow then he pops out and is like a piece of toast popping out of a toaster
Douglas Deleon Period 1
i always beleve that im in a wonderfull place that i was ment to be found
ReplyDeletethey where always there when i was down
when every ''puff'' puff puff i make
they seem to be like a cake
full of my puffy coating to them
every time i cry
they seem to die
they try everything to be able to cheer me up
fortunantly they cleared the black clouds
letting out the beutifull sun
knowing that always i beleve that im in a wonderfull place that i was ment to be found
Gino Gutierrez
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Past 5 he comes, all turns to glitter
ReplyDeleteHe says "boo" and all springs out to flicker
A die-hard worker, much like he is ready to blow
A laughter resonates much like a river flow
Every time I think of a hero, I think a plenty full
As a giant shield that's as mighty as bull
Because after all, he keeps us safe and protects us from evil
All he is and now, he is my dad always is able
-James Michael Agpalo
Period 1
that's as mighty as a bull
ReplyDeleteImperfect,impractical, whiny,
ReplyDeleteYet so hard to be rile,
Their still so tiny,
So hard to be vile
THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!
Dashing like the wind,
Making my head spin.
0 to 1, They win.
Never to late...
To make my run out of state.
As the sun creeps under her sheets
So to they.
As they sleep, I see them grin,
planing the next adventure no doubt
New, trained, gold
Chelsea Garvey
Period 1
Swish swish on my face
ReplyDeleteThe alarm speaks when they appear
the tear spilling from my eye
they seem to know why
love them so
bears with their cub,protected no on can hurt me
my heart beats as fast a cheetah because i know
they love me
Emily Santos
Period 3
we sometimes fuss we sometimes fight
ReplyDeletewe sometimes disagree but were always alright
we sometimes agree but sometimes don't
but break our bond we never wont
although we bicker
were as alike as too peas in a pod
she's my partner in crime
my sister and I are one amazing squad
-Neasha Shuler
Period 1
He ran like an escaped criminal running from a police car that had been chasing after him. He tripped over a flower and landed on his face, I laughed so hard that the people all the way in china couldt hear my histarical laugh. G. Waah waah went whiney willus when we walked without waving. Or asking if he needed help. Boom bang went willus's face as he fell to the ground then pow pow when he threw a rock at my head! [Vanessa<3]
ReplyDeleteRunning up and down
ReplyDelete"thump thump thump"
Two little girls
with a frogs jump
Laughing like hyenas
Hiding under my bed
Making the floor scream "AHH"
They then make there pounce
Like bouncing balls they bounced
I was going to scream my head off
Yes my two little sisters
But i gotta love them *cough* *cough*
_~Samylda~_
Period 1
He runs as if he's in a marathon
ReplyDeleteYou here him Pahting went he stops
He opens the door to breath
Yells so loud that a China hears his every word
Cries when his legs are getting cut off
Stefan Mirtil
Period 1
When baby giraffe falls her mommy giraffe will rescue her.
ReplyDeleteThen she asks her baby "why do we fall?"...
she then says "so that we can stand up again."
She saves her dearly soul from dangers like ssserpents and separation from the pack.
When the baby giraffe's friends ask about her mother, she says," my mommy is as radiant and as beautiful as the sunset."
No matter what I know she will always be there for me.
-Maria Camila Puerta
-Period 1
When you come into my house
ReplyDeleteyou will her a fuss and a shout
like a THUD against the wall
but no story at all.
Sadly I have 2
yes I do
I love them both
we all have to
we have each others back
no matter what
like the 3 musketeers
we'll never break up!
~ Vani Nair
$ Period 1
It is like a mouse,
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It wailed in the wheel,
Look at it trot
He is a blow horn
It it yells at you when angry
He is so awesome that he can be a king
My hamster, Hammy
Sebasttian Bedoya period 1
ReplyDeleteI see him everyday at home
ReplyDeleteHe always wants to play
"Wee" he says when having fun
He's as loud as a yell
He's my own alarm clock
He might be small but he always up to trouble
We might get mad but we always give our hugs
He's my brother he is always in my heart
Hector Cardenas Period 1
He like a cheetah running for food. A dolphin crying in he ocean. he really runs rapidly into rooms.
ReplyDeleteHe goes boom when you touch his stuff.You will here boom boom down the stairs and Vroom Vroom Vroom across the floor. When hes present the door waves its hand to greet him. he is my 2 year old brother that i love
- Tavon Turner
He's been through alot.He been detained for the wrong reasons.His Xbox goes boom when he owns at halo.It goes yay when he passes it down to me.I last saw him when i was 8.He's grown alot. He is my 21 year old brother.
ReplyDeleteHe's gone when I need him and there when I don't
ReplyDeletewhat I need from him he says he just won't
He's hyper and sometimes makes things go crash
when he wants something he tends to go smash
He can get so anyoing that i want to die
He takes my money then leaves and doesnt say bye
He is hard to find like hes in a group of doves
He's my brother and the one I love.
-Olivia Nembhard
I see him every holiday. Thanksgiving, Christmas, Easter, and Halloween. I rarely see him but when I do, I will hang out with him. Hes cool hes my Uncles son my family likes him too. But when he must leave My family will miss him too.
ReplyDeleteI like my cousin, hes pretty cool he finished college so im happy for him . Hes mostly at work or at home but when i see him I say hello
-Adam Vatai period 1
He barks when he is out side. He knocks us down with his big body, BOOM. He crys when he is sad an lonley.He gets hungry once in awhile, so we take him out for a while.
ReplyDeleteThat is favorite dog Rocky.
Tahvier gets excited when on the field
ReplyDeletewhen im on the defense i hit the quaterback
and his body hitd the floor!Boom.He crys and
calls me names no noise noticed nick.He gets as mad as an hornet when i ran the ball my shoulder
pads were like force fields pouncing everybody
to the other side of the field i was so happy i could give away a thousand dollars
She's cool, she's funny,
ReplyDeleteShe's best to be around,
She's fun, she's random,
Anyone she meets, she astounds.
She's different, shes unique,
She's sad only one time a week,
But sometimes she's a geek,
She's my sister.