Assignment: Read an article from the January 2011 issue of "The Raider Reporter" and write a 6-8 sentence summary. Please include the following:
- Topic Sentence
- Details from the article
- Transitional Words/Phrases
- Would you recommend this article to a friend? Why or why not?
7th Grade 8th Grade
- Chelsea Garvey 1. Alex Guallpa
- Laura Gonzalez 2. Shawn Thomas
- Gino Gutierrez 3. Joshua V
- Mya Washington 4. Lady Ashley
- Maria Camila Puerta 5. Lamont Preston
- Neysha Rivera
- Vani Nair
- Justin George
- Tavon Turner
- John Ganan
- Iyanna "Lil Red" Kennedy
- Jason Buret
- Vanessa Vilchis
- Franklin Morocho
- Neasha Shuler
- Latrice Muckle
- Morelia Huaman
- Heather Rubin
- Thalia Huaman
- Bianca Arellano
- Lauren Villalobos
- Taylor Harris
- James Michael Agpalo
- Emily Santos
- Sebastian B.
- Jhoy Saca
- Dezere Watkins
- Cristian Barriga
- Timothy Huynh
- Josteen Gonzales
- Adam Vatai
- Olivia Nembhard
- Kristine Rupnarain
- Lisset Fuerte
- Vishnu Unnithan
- Samantha Mendez
- Sebastian H.
- Kelly Fajardo
- Miranda Machado
- Tye Weezy
Lil Wayne needs to identify himself or he/she will NOT be given credit. ALL posts must end with your name and period number...
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If you don't have a copy of the paper, come by my room tomorrow and pick one up. Also, 8th graders need to drop off their journals tomorrow as well.
ReplyDeleteAs far as the comic strip, it doesn't count as an article for this assignment...but feel free to make a brief comment on it if you feel inclined to do so.
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The article I read was Chaos.This article is very interesting.Chaos is about two friends,and one of them has to die.The protagonist friend gives him a gun.He tells him that he can't see him die,so he tells him to kill himself.However,there are also other people that are going to die it's not only him.He said to himself that it was going to be the last time he saw his friend,he put the gun inside his throat.Then,He pull the trigger slowly and he felt the blood go down his neck,but then he woke up.Therefore,this article is very interesting.
ReplyDelete~Laura Gonzalez~
Period 1
This article is called Sibiling Secrets by Jazmine Johnson,a senior thats graduating this year who put her story on the raider reporter.It says she liked to write short stories in her private notebook since she was 15 yrs old she decided that her story was so good that she wanted it published but it cost money.Her book motivatied her to get a job which she still has in preperation of her publication and the sequel and her future books she payed her package for about three months the technical events began such as signingof books recieving copies rights and marketing packages.I would recommend this to a student because she was working hard to get her first book published and it meant alot to her so she worked hard saved her money an got her book published and know she feels good about her self
ReplyDeleteThe article that i had read is Chaos , by an anonymouse student.This article is about a person who is traped in a cage with many other people and theyre are trying to escape from this person/animal who is trying to kill them.Then he/she saw his/her friend tearing the crowd to see him/her.Then his/her friend gave him/her a gun to shoot him/her self to not let "Chaos" to kill him/her.When he/she shot him/she self he/she suddenly woke up from this nightmare he/she had.I recommand this to other people because this article shows how this person deals with the situation that he/she was in.
ReplyDeleteGino Gutierrez Period 4
The article I have read is called Sibling Secrets by Jasmine Johnson. She recently had her book she wrote, Sibling Secrets, published. Jasmine has been working on this book since she was 15 years old. When she had finished writing her book she had decided to have it published. She says that during the process it required patience, understanding, and money. Her publishing expenses reached one thousand dollars, but that did not stop her , so she got a job. After 3 months paying for the book they began marketing packages. Her book is available to day if anyone is interested. You should read this article because it shows that if we work hard we can make our dreams a reality.
ReplyDelete-Hector Cardenas
Period 1
The article I read was Chaos.This article is about two friends that were locked up somewhere and both friends made there way out.So one of the friends gave the other friend a gun to kill herself.The friends both whispered "I love you".So one of the friends took the gun and pulled the trigger.But it all ended up to be a dream.I would recommend this to ALL of my friends because even though its a dream it kinda makes you think of what you would do if that was happening to you.This was very interesting and the first sentence really caught my eye even though the reading was all a dream.
ReplyDeleteThe Musical Mya Washington
Period3
The article I read was a Book Review by Jesse Young, Grade 12. He reviewed the book he read Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte. This article was a little hard to understand because of the advanced vocabulary, but I still found out what it was about. Jane Eyre was orphaned as a baby; she struggles through her nearly loveless childhood and becomes governess at Thornfield Hall. Although she falls in love with her wealthy employer, Edward Rochester, her strong sense of conscience does not let her to become his mistress, and she does not return to him until his insane wife is dead and she herself has come into an inheritance. This is an Autobiography. It’s about a love affair between a 19 year-old governess and her nearly 40 year-old master. There are many themes, like courage, zeal, sacrifice, and love. There was also a lot of passion and enthralling romance between the characters. Therefore, I haven’t read this book but with this book review I know what some of the book is about. It seems like a very engaging, and interesting book. This book recommended to people of all ages. I would recommend this article to another friend because instead of going for the easy articles they should try to challenge themselves in something harder that will make them think about more.
ReplyDelete-Maria Camila Puerta
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the article i read about was by an anoymous student.the article is called chaos .this article was about two boys who was fighting for their lives an trying to escape.well one of those boys had to give up their lives because others was going to kill him so the friend told him to kill himself. He had a choice to live and die slowly or just get it over with,it was pain ful to him becuase it was the last time he would see his friend so, when he was about to kill himself he told his friend 'i love you". when he shot the gun in his mouth he felt an impact throw him down to the air,but before he could hit the ground he woke up .
ReplyDelete~neysha rivera~
`period 3~
The article that had caught my eye is named" The Letter" by Angelene Dimaano. There are three parts to the story and in this one(part 3) is about a girl that has come face to face with a "substance". She was in her room and her eyes just randomly turned red. Her eyes didn't change after that, so she had to wear glasses so no one realizes anything. When she thought everything was starting to be normal she had arrived to her locker and saw a note attached to it. It was written in blood-red ink and said you are one of us now and to meet "them" at midnight on Christmas Eve. From that moment on she knew that someone was watching her and that she wasn't alone.
ReplyDelete~Vani Nair~
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The article that I have read is Chaos by an anonymous student.This article is about to loving friends,however one of them end up dieing.Everybody is trying to save themselves from getting killed.One of the friends was able to manage themselves to get to the other.One of the friends took a gun and said to the other friend to kill your self,because the other friend could not watch his friend die.He whispered I love you before committing suicide.The friend with the gun pulled the trigger but it turned out to be a dream.To conclude,I would recommend others to read this article.You should read this article because it has action,love,and friendship.
ReplyDeleteThe article i read was called chaos! This article was about two boys that were unfortunetlly in a cage and were about to die a harble way. many others were in the cage , but as the two best friends stand next to each other... They say their last words and manage to say i love you to each other. It was very sad and neither of them wanted to die a slowly painfull way so his friend pulled out his gun. then gave it two his friend and as the friend said his last word he put it in his mouth and BOOM!!! he pulled the trigger. As he felt the shot and the blood all of a sudden he wakes up!!! (where)???
ReplyDelete---> Tavon <----(A.K.A Double T.)
The article I read was Mexican Pride by Alexis Wampler. This article is about Mexico. Mexico was colonized by Spain.This means that Mexicans speak Spanish . The food made by Mexico was from the ideas of the Aztecs and Spanish. Holidays that Mexico celebrates is Candelaria day and a Quinceanera. Candelaria day has dances, and a bullfight. A Quinceneara is when a girl that is fourteen, turns fifteen and becomes a woman. For example,in the Quinceneara, the girl wears a big dress and dances with a person of her choice. I would recommend this article to a friend because they could learn about a country that they are not from.
ReplyDeleteThe name of the article that i read was chaos. It was about 2 kids that were best friends. But the problemk was that they were traoed inside a cage with no food and their was others but they could not do any thing but just wait to die or madey someone could recue them all. So his friend took out a gun and gave it to his friend and they said thier last woords his friend put it in his mouth and HE PULLED THE TRIGER. He felt a shoot and when he did not even notice it he woke up.
ReplyDelete-John Ganan -period 2
The article I read was called Chaos. This article is about two boys who were friends that were in a cage and they say there last words to each other "I love you". They didnt want to die but the friend pulled out the gun but the other friend couldn't watch so he put the gun in his mouth and pulled the trigger he soon relizes that he has blood dripping down his throat, but then he wakes up and realizes it was a dream.I would recommend this story to people to read because its a very powerful story filled with action and a close friendship
ReplyDeleteiyanna aka(lilred)
period-3
the article that i read was chaos who wanted to keep her/his identity secret, so she/he was anonymous. i assume the author is a girl because of what was in the article, romance, but the bit of action keeps you thinking. it is about two friends who find each other trapped in a cage of some sort, thousands of feet in the air. there are many people trapped inside the cage all trying to find a way out. the protagonist fights his/her way out of the crowd to a corner. his/her friend approaches her and sais he cant stand to see her/him like this so he asked her to kill herself to stop the pain. he/she only does it for the same reason hes asking her to do it. they both tell each other that they love each other before she grabs the gun, puts it in her mouth, and pulls the trigger. the blood is rushing down her neck and shes falling, heart is beating and before she can feel the impact of the ground.... she opens her/his eyes and hes finally,
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jason buret =)
period 4
The article I read from the "Raider Report" is about a senor in our school (AHHS) who acomplished such a huge goal. You see, Jasmine Johnson is a typical girl who will graduate this year. She enjoys to write stories in her private notebook since she was 15. She decieded. To publish her book. However, the cost for this is. $1,000 so she worked hard to accomplish her goal. She has a job wich is a great start and is showing terrific effort that shows how much she wants her book to be published. As a teacher who shall not be named said, "The students (us) of today are the stars of tommorrow" back to Jasmine. The title of her book is titled " Sibling Secrets" even the title is intresting. Hopefully her achievments and dedication effort, and hard work will rub off on the school and prove that we can do great things if you put your mind to it and work yourself to the top. Many of our teachers push us to the top we should be greatful because, the tiny things we or our teachers do for us well turn out HUGE in the future. Its great to see what students are accomplishing in our school. I personly hope. To hear about Jasmine Johnson,and maybe get her autograph cause in my opinion she's a big a star here at AHHS. I look forward to reading her book. * hmmm that will make an excellent 3rd quarter I.R book :) - vanessa
ReplyDeleteThe article I read from the Raider Report was (The Letter) part 3.A girl realizes her eyes are turning red and also her room.She thinks nobody would look at her eyes if she's wearing glasses,but the worst part is it doesn't and there .She finds a note written in blood red ink reading `your one of us now and to meet them at midnight at Christmas Eve'.
ReplyDeleteThe Article i read from the Raider Report was Chaos. This was about two best friends and how they were trapped in the cage. Not being able to take it anymore the two friends said there last words to each other. One of them pulled out a gun and handed it to his\her friend. He\she put the gun to her throat and as he/she said his\her last word "I Love You" he\she pulled the trigger. As he\she saw and felt the blood running down his\her neck she\he suddenly woke up.
ReplyDeleteNeasha Shuler
Period 1
I read the article written by Jasmine Johnson. The name of the article is Sibling Secrets. It is about the book she wrote called Sibling Secrets. She decided to get the book published. Her publishing expenses was about a thousand dollars. The publishing company that she chose was Author-House. Her book came out on Tuesday, December 7th of last year. There is also going to be a book signing in our school. I would not recommend this article to any of my friends because I don't think any of them would even care about this.
ReplyDeleteShawn Thomas
Period 7
The article I read was Chaos. Chaos is about two best friends that are trapped in a cage. And are not able to take it anymore so one of them pulls out a gun and hands it to the other friend. So he/she puts the gun to there throat and before he/she pulls the trigger they say there last words to each other,"I Love You". Then he/she had pulled the trigger, and as he/she hd started to see and feel the blood running down on his/her neck he/she had then woke up an realized that it was all a
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-Latrice Muckle(Lala),period 3, English 7 x33
The article i read is called Sibling Secrets by Jasmine Johnson. This article is about the story of how Jasmine Johnson wrote her book and etc. If I were her i would have never published a book. My parents would kill me for the expenses of almost $1000. She is planing on writing a series of books . So far she got two and i don't think she can get far in life by writing books. I wouldn't recommend this book to someone because i never read it or know who the hell Jasmine Johnson is.
ReplyDeleteJoshua V.
Period 7
The article I read was Chaos. Chaos is about two best friends that are trapped in a cage. They werent able to stand there any more so he pulled a gun out from his pocket, and he said i cant watch them kill you soo he turned away and he said "i love you". He took the gun away not because he wanted to avoid the slow and painful death, is because he couldnt watch thoes animals tear him to piece.He stayed there and put the gun in his mouth and once he was about to pull the trigger he woke up.
ReplyDelete*Morelia Huaman*
period 4
The article I read was, "Sibling Secrets," by Jasmine Johnson. In this article, Jasmine explains her experience of publishing her book. She explains the expenses and pretty much the whole process. Jasmine is in 12th grade and her book "went live" Tuesday, December 7th, 2010. In the near future, she is planning a book signing in the Alexander Hamilton High School library. I would recommend this to other people because it's fascinating to learn about the writing talent that some of our peers have. Therefore, I would love to read her book. Her article describes an image, so I can imagine that her book does, as well.
ReplyDelete- Heather Rubin
Period 1
The article I read was the chaos it was about that one of the friends went the other side of the cage and they were hundred feet off the ground. he then pulled out a gun from his pocket, put it in my other hand and said, "I can't watch them kill you, please do it yourself I love you." I then took the gun,not becuase i wanted to avoid the slow and painful death, but becuase i coudn't watch those animals tear him to pieces.
ReplyDeleteThalia huaman
period 3
The article I read was Sibling Secrets by Jasmine Johnson. The article was about Jasmine a senior in AHHS who wrote a novel which is now sold in Authorhouse.com, BN.com, and Amazon.com and The Barnes and Noble book store called Sibling Secrets.She was 15 years old when she started writing in her private journals. She wanted to publish the book but the publishing expenses was about to 1,000 dollars. After three month payment she was able to pay to publish her book with Authorhouse the publishing company she chose. The Authorhouse helped her with technical difficulties that they provided alternate solutions that were easy and practical. Her book went live Tuesday, December 7th, 2010. Also, she will be having a book siging in the school library the date is to be determined yet. I think it will be a great book. I would recommond this article so they can follow there dream like Jasmine did.
ReplyDelete-Bianca Arellano =)
period 4
The article I read was a Book Review by Jesse Young. He reviewed the book he read Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte.Jane Eyre was an orphan as a baby, she struggled in her childhood and becomes governess.she falls in love with her wealthy employer, Edward Rochester.this book is mainly about a love affair between a 19 year-old governess and her nearly 40 year-old man. in conclusion , even though i never read this book it seems very entertaining and interesting.
ReplyDeletelauren villalobos
The articial that I choose to read from the Raider Report was chaos.chaos was about to friends that were stuck in a cage. The presure of being in the cage got to them and they said there last words and one of the friends he/she pulled a gun out of their pocket and handed it to there friend.as the friend he/she put it to thier neck they said thier last words "I Love You" he/she pulled the trigger the person woke up and the whole story was a dream.In my opinon you should read this articial because it includes a strong friendship,love,and action.
ReplyDelete-Taylor Harris-period3
The article I chose to read in The Raider Reporter (January, 2011) is the story Chaos, which is by an anonymous student (I want to know who is the student who wrote this). The story is all about how a person (probably the author of the article) attempts to commit suicide because of mass chaos that has happened in the fictional world. The person was behind bars with a chaotic crowd that seem to "mosh" against each other to get out of a unknown setting (possibly a prison). A friend pulled out a gun and gave it to him/her and told him to "kill himself" because it hurts for him to see his/her friend get killed by the mad crowd. He also told the protagonist that he "loves him/her."
ReplyDeleteHe/she then opens his/her mouth and shot him/herself right through the throat. The protagonist feels the warm blood flow down through his/her neck then he/she blacks out and falls to death. Then he/she wakes up. I would recommend this book to people who like bloody and gory action because well it's "a bloody and gory action story."
-James Michael Agpalo
Period 1 (I don't get the Two-Trigger Thompson poster. How that that have anything to do with the story)
The article that i decided to read was Chaos.In which case was made by an anonymous student. In this story there are 2 friends trapped in cage. One of the friends couldn't bare to see the other die from the mad crowd.Before anything the friend said to the other that he/she love him. He/She gave them the gun and he/she shot themselves in the throat.The other friend felt the warm blood flow and then falls blacks out and falls to death. The he/she woke up...(weird)
ReplyDeleteEmily Santos
period 3
The article i read was "Chaos" by an anonymous student. The story was about a person that is locked up. It shows how the people are so frightened that they have completely gone insane. The protagonist is supposed th kill his/herself. The main charachter is nervous and running out of time because the predator is coming to kill him/her. He/she put the gun into his/her mouth and pulled the trigger. The shot made them fly in the air and that is when they woke up.
ReplyDeleteThe artical that I read was Choas by an Anonymous Student. This artical is about two characters trapped, and have no were to go but to stand their and be killed. One of the characters doesn't want to see them kill her so he gives her a gun that he took out of his pocket and says "I can't watch them kill you, please do it yourself.... I love you". Then they hear the predators getting closer and she took the gun pressed her head with his head and said "I love you". She looked around one more time and took the gun put it in her mouth and pulled the trigger slowly. She felt like everything had colmed down and that they were waiting to be killed. She felt the warm blood rush down her neck and when she was about to fall and land in the ground he/she woke up and realized that she was only dreaming. I would recommend this artical to a friend only if they like bloody and a unhappy stories. Also I would recommend this because it has alot of great detail and it is a very understanding artical.
ReplyDeleteJhoy Saca Period 3
The book I read is chaos.This book is about two different students who get trapped in a cage and that wait for them to get killed one by one and can't escape.Then the caracter had given a gun to the other person so they don't have to wait any longer and shot herself and felt the blood.As that was happening she woke up and finally found out it wasn't real after all and was a dream that was very mysterious.I choose this article because it was interesting and was a little mysterious.
ReplyDeleteDezere Watkins
Period 4
-Dezere Watkins
Period 4
The article i read was "Chaos" by an anonymous student. It was about this person who was locked up in a cage with his/her's friend. They both have no way out and the person is about to get killed. Then, his/her's friend gave him/her a gun to kill him/herself because his/her friend couldn't bare to watch him die. The predator is getting close and he/she decides to put the gun in his/her's mouth and slowly pull the trigger. He/she then felt the sensation of pain and blood going down his neck. Finally, he/she had awaken.
ReplyDelete~Cristian Barriga
Period 1
The article i read was The Letter by Angelene Dimaano.In the article this is a story about a person who was a problem with her eyes. This article doesnt really describe the gender of this character or life.When the person goes to school,there is a note from The Burning Sirens.The note says That the person is one of them and they want the person to go meet them.He or She may have bad eyes on the other hand she has contacts.I would recommend this article to a friend because this story is interesting beacause there is someone just like this person just like her that wants to meet her and it haset happened yet.
ReplyDeleteTimothy Huynh
period 4
The article i read was "Planting Daffodils".This article was talking about Ms.Tenzer's and Ms.Zucker's class planting seeds that the Elmsford PTA provided.This article also said that doing this will make our school look more beautiful.I would recommend this article to my friend because i think if everybody in our school chipped in a little we can make our school way nicer.
ReplyDelete-Josteen Gonzales
Period 4
The article that i decided to read was Chaos by and anonymous student. It was about someone who was locked up with her friends. They were in a cage hundreds of feet off the ground. Their predators were gaining up on them and everyone was scared. The girls guardian angel was there with her. She didn't know what to do and then she realized. She calmed down, took the gun and shot herself in the mouth. Everyone was silent, and then before she hot the ground, she woke up. It was all a dream.
ReplyDeleteThe article is called Sibiling Secrets and it was written by Jasmine Johnson. It is about a book she wrote and she published it. The total coast for publishing the book was 1000 dollars. She used to help a company called AuthorHouse. She is having a book signing in Hamilton but the date is still not determined yet
ReplyDeleteI read the article Chaos by an anonymous student. It was about these people locked up in a cage and they were about to get ripped apart. Everyone was scared out of their minds and screaming for help. they were dangling off the ground and about to be eaten. One of the student gave her a gun to kill herself and instead of a slow painful death it would be quick. She takes the gun and puts it in her mouth, just as she is about to pull the trigger everything turns silent and she wakes up. then she realizes tha it was all a dream.
ReplyDelete-Adam Vatai
The article I read about from the Raider Reporter, by an anonymous student, called Chaos. This aticle was very interesting. A group of students were trapped in a cage all going to die. Instead of going through a slow painful death the protagonist gets a gun from his friend. The protagonist realizes before killing himslef that this would be the last time he would see his friend. Pulling the trigger of the gun he feels the blood flowing down his throught. Then the protagonist wakes up to see that it had all been a scary dream. I would recommend this article to someone else in fact i had my mom read it. I would recommend it because it was exciting to read.
ReplyDeleteI think that the commic strip was funny and the fact that he didn't notice that she was backing was the funniest part, even though it was kind of cheesy.
-Olivia Nembhard
The article I read from the January 2011 edition of The Raider Report was "A Model Experience" by 12th grader, Thomas Henson. I chose to read this article because my sister went to Princeton Model Congress, which is what he wrote about in his entry. I also aspire to attend this trip in the 10th grade, which is the earliest you can go. I learned that Princeton Model Congress is a great learning and beneficial experience. I saw Thomas Henson included the benefits and things that were tough from this trip. He also includes how fun and what an impact it makes to see how things in the political/government branch work in the real world. I realized from reading and knowing about this trip how different things are and I look forward to going on this great trip.
ReplyDelete- Kristine Rupnarain
Period 1
The article i read was "Sibling Secrets" by Jasmine Johnson.In the article it mentions that Jasmine enjoyed writing stories after stories in her private journal.When she was was 15 she thought of another fiction story to write about.After writing part one of the series Jasmine decided to publish her book as"a form of kudos" to her accomplishment.To publish the book it cost her 1,000 dollars,inwhich she needed a job to pay for.Eventually she was able to pay for the book to be published and her book is now available on Amazon.com,AuthorHouse.com,and you canbuy it at Barnes and Nobles.I would recomend for someone to read this article so maybe they can be inspired to write a book like Jasmine Johnson.
ReplyDelete~lisset fuerte period 3~
The article I read from the Raider Report is chaos by an anonymous student. This article was about two best friends an a bunch of people trapped in a caged. These people were about to be killed by a animal. Until then one of the friends give him a gun and said to kill herself. The other person said "I love you" and then the girl shot herself. In the end the girl was alive. I liked this article because it shows that the people in the caged are in a lot of trouble and that how brave one best friend gave the girl his gun. I also like how the author did not reveal him or her self so it would be a mystery. I thought this was the best article in the Raider report.
ReplyDeleteVishnu Unnithan
Period 4
The article I read was Sibling Secrets by Jasmine Johnson. Jaz had to publish the book and it cost a thousand dollars to publish the book. It motivate her to take on a job. Her book was avalible in Authorhouse.com,BN.com, and the Barns & Nobles book store.There will be a book signing in the Alexander Hamilton library. The date and time will be determined soon!
ReplyDelete-Samantha Mendez
-Period: 4
i read the book kalled sibilings by jazmine johnson it was about her wanting to publish her first book that she wrote when she was 15 an mr vergara i did this already
ReplyDeletei was lil wayne
ReplyDeleteso i should be givin creditt
ReplyDeleteI read the article Chaos by an Anonymous Student. This article is about people trapped in a caged about to be attacked by an animal. The people inside the cage prayed and hoped that they will live. Some were to frightened and probably killed themselves. For example, the narrator who had a gun and commited suicide. I would recommend this article to my friends because they would enjoy a short horror story.
ReplyDeleteI'll give you your credit Tye - but do not for a second start poppin' off about who "should be given credit" - you SHOULD have signed your name like everyone else did. I'm not a mind-reader, but I can tell you the next time you don't sign your name - you WILL NOT BE GIVEN CREDIT.
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I read the article called A model experience by Thomas Henson, grade 12. The main idea of this story was about him and his friends Ebere Anokute and Jesse young joining the PMC. The PMC is the princeton model congress in Washington DC. He tells you how his journey was and as nerve wracking as it seems it was pretty interesting and worth the time paying the fee as he experienced being in the PMC.For example, his first two years of PMC he served in the committee positions, one year he was a senator and this year he was selected to be apart of the presidential cabinet. He did not expect how challenging this was ,but he enjoyed the experience.I would recommend this to a friend if their interested in debates and would be interested to be apart of this.This story was very interested for me and i think someone else would enjoy it like i did.
ReplyDelete-Kelly Fajardo
Period 3.
The article read in the 2011 Raider Report was Chaos, by an anonymous student. This article is about a group of people being trapped in a cage. The main character and his friend are two of the people trapped. Instead of them staying in the cage for however long they were meant to, the main character recieves a gun and pulls the trigger on himself. Luckily, the protagonist wakes up and realizes it was all a crazy dream. I would recommend this article because it tells what someone would probably do in a time like this. If they had an idea of how to get out, maybe they wouldn't have killed themselves.
ReplyDelete-Miranda Machado
Period 1
In the Red Raiders Reporter i found the Staffs New Years Resoulutin very important.For example,Mr.Blondel wanting to get healthier nd stay in shape. Also,Ms.Carperna wanting to wait for people to finish speaking before butting in.It shows that not only us childeren want to achieve to our high spectations,but our teachers too!!They all have something they wish to improve in just like us,weather its teaching or outside of school activities.I would recommend this article to another student bacause,it's interesting and get to learn important facts about our teachers and changes.
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